Mujhe mere Haatho ki lakeero mein nahi mile tum Tumne na jaane kaise aapne haatho mein mujhe dhoond liya
yun to anjaan hi the tum har awaaz se, na jaane kaise tumne meri aahat ko sun liya.
tip tip girti boondein pehli baarish ki, pyaasi ret ko rula gayi, wo khaali si ek jagah mujhme thi kahin, na jaane kaise tumne har us jagah ko bhar diya.
i usually dnt blog,, bt yes i do keep getting a few lines here n there bt normally i dnt write them, these two lines of ur's were waiting to be completed,hence wrote smthng...
n apart frm this i dnt have any hobby related to reading or writing, i do hv a small blog bt its into music,,
even in ur blog i hvnt read many of ur writings coz most of them r bit lengthy, this was the shortest... :)
nice poems....
जवाब देंहटाएंMujhe mere Haatho ki lakeero mein nahi mile tum
जवाब देंहटाएंTumne na jaane kaise aapne haatho mein mujhe dhoond liya
yun to anjaan hi the tum har awaaz se,
na jaane kaise tumne meri aahat ko sun liya.
tip tip girti boondein pehli baarish ki,
pyaasi ret ko rula gayi,
wo khaali si ek jagah mujhme thi kahin,
na jaane kaise tumne har us jagah ko bhar diya.
hmmm...
जवाब देंहटाएंjust two lines were not doing justice, so added a few more,,,
but i still feel that its incomplete,,, will add more if i get better n matching lines..
nyways nice work, nice blogs
thanks again and u are always welcome....u hvn't written anything in ur profile about ur self ..why????
जवाब देंहटाएंi usually dnt blog,,
जवाब देंहटाएंbt yes i do keep getting a few lines here n there bt normally i dnt write them, these two lines of ur's were waiting to be completed,hence wrote smthng...
n apart frm this i dnt have any hobby related to reading or writing, i do hv a small blog bt its into music,,
even in ur blog i hvnt read many of ur writings coz most of them r bit lengthy, this was the shortest...
:)
This profile was new so i didnt have any info initially,
जवाब देंहटाएंbt i hv updated it now,
thanx fr reminding.
@Ansul ya its ok now...i visited ur blog and profile .... very nice collection of songs.
जवाब देंहटाएंthanks...
जवाब देंहटाएं(kindly add 'h' to my name,,,)
:)
actualy, thats my main hobby, though at a very amateur level,,,
i dnt write much..
just love music..
oh m sorry ans'h'ul :)
जवाब देंहटाएंu can remove ' and '
जवाब देंहटाएंit looks good when its just anshul
:) :) :D
जवाब देंहटाएं@somesh huh
जवाब देंहटाएं